Honest poem criticism, please? HoNeSt?

that is probably the most beautiful poetry i have read. i really want to use the first poem "he left" for forensics...if thats okay. forensics is when you speak a piece of poetry for your cl and you have to memories it it from famous, unknown, or anything else author. it would be part of my grade. i think it would be awesome to use yours. i also love my word. its all beautiful.